Your scene is visually astonishing – the close ups remind me of a real soap opera. The dialogue works wonderfully, but perhaps for a soap opera, the characters are a bit too original and grungy. In soaps, they are usually all bold and beautiful airheads.
Creating Worlds 
Your scene is visually astonishing – the close ups remind me of a real soap opera. The dialogue works wonderfully, but perhaps for a soap opera, the characters are a bit too original and grungy. In soaps, they are usually all bold and beautiful airheads.